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Post by anthony on Jun 5, 2014 6:41:12 GMT -5
Hi! Sorry for my long absence, I was just to busy with school and everything.
As my comment on this story, You've done a really good work. the chaters "Gale from the East" and "Kovacevic" are definitely my favorite ones, You've described 'the wilderness' thing in a really nice way, along with the wild balkan spirit.
I couldn't find any mistakes in the whole thing, nor there was nothing that would seem inproper to me. I will read the "roots for the future" now, and I will also share a comment on it, thoug I feel that it's going to be as great as this story was.
With greetings, Anthony
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Post by ravengrim on Jun 23, 2014 13:28:15 GMT -5
A very good writing style and an interesting plot make this story really great! Thanks for sharing it Sometimes a little confusing for me though, probably because my English isn't too good. Sorry if this might be a silly question, but what is 'djeda'? I think I missed that somehow... Anyway, I really enjoyed this piece. regards
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