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Post by anthony on May 24, 2014 14:00:23 GMT -5
I've also read it. Well done Andrew, that is a really good story. Quite complex and very interesting. I really liked the idea of using Nordic mythology, and the avatar of Loki... Brilliant ! You really did an awesome job. Shame that I lack the talent of writing. Tried to write some stories myself, but none of those was so great as the ones You write. Again, I have to say that You have an great talent to this, and you should continue writing. I can't wait to see the next things that you're going to write ^^ .
With greetings, Anthony.
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Post by andrew on May 24, 2014 18:33:36 GMT -5
To Ravengrim: I'm very glad to hear that! And for you to have favorite scenes, too! If you, or anyone, have sugestions about how the tale could be better, or longer ( ) or shorter, diferent technique, what chars or scenes were a little unexplained or too much, or on what kind of critter should Bullmann have been transformed, if you would like a sequel, well, that kind of things, let me know. And if you sometime need a little of prose, let me know too. See the PM for more details. And of course, waiting your favorite scenes To Anthony: Hehe, i knew you would like that guy! I mean, who doesn't enjoy a little unethically mischievous, vengeful and fireball launching god walking around the streets? (without talking about his "mentor", of course ) And the nordic mithology by itself have some really deep insights about how the world is made. About the talent of writing, i was paralyzed a lot of time before publishing some of my stories here, quite fearful about they won't like or bore or be, practically, shitty; i decided to give a try, even risking onto a complete new gender to me. You have a lot of good ideas to tell too. See your pm.
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Post by anthony on May 24, 2014 19:20:26 GMT -5
I especially liked the Nordic thing, because I used to be interested in Nordic mythology too. I've even learned to use the 'old futharc' - Nordic rune alphabet. I use it when I'm making notes for myself, or when I'm writing down some ideas that i want to keep for myself.
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Post by andrew on Sept 10, 2014 17:57:38 GMT -5
Added some illustrations that Ravengrim had made for the tale and me, and, by laziness really, still didn't uploaded (my fault, completely). All the credits to him, obviously, and the congratulations for such nice pieces of art. On the first post, as usual.
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